Research Paper

Even though I was not in class on friday, I got a good review on my research paper so far. Jake gave me some good tips on what to fix and how to make my argument even stronger. I think it is always good to have someone else read your paper and give their opinion on what they thought was really good and what you need to fix. It makes writing papers a lot easier, and also helps to improve your grade with the final draft. I think that when I make the revisions and focus on the parts I could make stronger, my paper will be far better than it is now.